Story

Hi guys, today I am going to be writing off of a prompt Miss Anderson gave the class. Here it is:
On our hot bus ride to school, we noticed the driver looking pale and drowsy. Before we knew it, he was fast asleep! Nobody knew what to do. Obviously, none of us can drive so we had to think of a different way. Karen said if we all work together and think of a plan we can try to wake him up or somehow drive the bus. The problem was he fell onto the gas pedal and the bus was going very fast. A few people tried to move him but he was too heavy! Then we came up with another idea, but we had to do it quicklly beause we were heading down a very steep hill. And at the bottom of the hill was the river! So I climbed up in the front seat and started pressing on the break. It squeeled loudly. It started slowing down and we stopped right in front of the river! We were all so relieved and we opened the door so we could get off. Everyone walked up to the front of the bus and we heard something.
"The bus is rolling!" somebody shouted.
And they were right, the bus rolled into the water before anyone could get off. The water level was up to the windows and water was rushing in. We all scrambeled to the front of then bus to get out. Luckily everyone including the bus driver, who fell asleep in the grass when we got out of the river, made it out safely. Then the craziest thing happened. I woke up.

Comments

  1. That is a very exciting story! I like the ending. What was the prompt?

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  2. Awesome post! It was very intriguing! I was excited to see what was going to happen next! You should make a sequel to this prompt.

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  3. That was really good and I love how you put "Then the craziest thing happened I woke up." Really good job I hope you write more stories.

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